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Yutaka Nagakura
Special Jounin
Posts : 124
Join date : 2015-03-21
Age : 24
Location : Land of Water
| Subject: Ash Release: Ash Dragon  Sat Mar 28, 2015 8:52 pm | |
| Name: Ash Release: Ash Dragon
Rank: B-Rank
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ash
Duration/Cooldown: 2/5
Range: 40 meters
Appearance: The user releases Ash from their mouths creating an Ash dragon in which they can control through mental commands.
What it does: The user performs the handseals Horse -> Dog -> Rat -> Dragon and releases Ash from their mouths forming a dragon. If caught in the dragon the person will be put under immense amounts of pressure due to the amount of condensed Ash. The Ash puts enough pressure on a person (With B-Rank or lower health) to break their bones. The dragon is 20 meters long and can move a total of 40 meters from where it was made. The dragon has B-Rank health.
Wordcount to learn: 2000
Chakra Cost: B-Rank
Bonus Requirements: Must know Ash Release
Backstory: This jutsu was based off of Suiton: Water Dragon and Doton: Earth and Stone Dragon. The Nagakura made this jutsu unique by making it an Ash Release technique as well.
Last edited by Yutaka Nagakura on Tue Apr 21, 2015 8:39 am; edited 3 times in total | |
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Shinmaru Aburame
Anbu Captain
Posts : 123
Join date : 2015-03-25
Age : 32
| | Subject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon Sat Mar 28, 2015 11:22 pm | |
| Approved unless missed something | |
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Yutaka Nagakura
Special Jounin
Posts : 124
Join date : 2015-03-21
Age : 24
Location : Land of Water
| | Subject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon Tue Apr 07, 2015 8:26 pm | |
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Roland Ootsutsuki
Owner
Posts : 1195
Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet
Character Name: Roland
Clan: Ootsutsuki
Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| | Subject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon Fri Apr 10, 2015 5:10 pm | |
| This needs more details, how much pressure? How big is the actual dragon? Whats the health of the dragon? Etc. | |
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Yutaka Nagakura
Special Jounin
Posts : 124
Join date : 2015-03-21
Age : 24
Location : Land of Water
| | Subject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:04 pm | |
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Roland Ootsutsuki
Owner
Posts : 1195
Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet
Character Name: Roland
Clan: Ootsutsuki
Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| | Subject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:03 pm | |
| Okay anyone with B rank health or below will have their bones broken as this is worded, is that acceptable? | |
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Yutaka Nagakura
Special Jounin
Posts : 124
Join date : 2015-03-21
Age : 24
Location : Land of Water
| | Subject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon Tue Apr 21, 2015 8:40 am | |
| Edited so that you don't make a connection between the dragon's health and the ability of the ash to break bones. | |
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Roland Ootsutsuki
Owner
Posts : 1195
Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet
Character Name: Roland
Clan: Ootsutsuki
Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| | Subject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon Tue Apr 21, 2015 11:05 am | |
| I was letting you know the acceptable amount of power,
Approved | |
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