Venus Academy
Posts : 116 Join date : 2015-03-22
| Subject: Strengthening prescription: Chakra Injection Fri Apr 10, 2015 12:05 am | |
| Name: Strengthening prescription: Chakra Injection Rank: S Jutsu Type: medical, ninjutsu Element: varies, yang Duration/Cooldown: Snakes can be maintained for five posts with a six post cool down Range: snakes can reach a 40 meter radius Appearance: - injection :
- If they drink it :
What it does: A technique based on on the dark side of the medical ninjutsu. Through incredible chakra control this technique creates a max of sixteen dark snakes created from medically altered yang chakra that forcibly connect with a person and inject them with medically altered yang chakra. These snakes have a speed and health stat determined by the user's rank in medical enhancement. This extra chakra will allow those injected to use high level element ninjutsu techniques that they could not use before. The chakra is not infinite, and must be replenished over time. Furthermore, only one type of elemental chakra can be injected into the person at a time. Those injected receive a free S rank amount of chakra and have their chakra capacity and ninjutsu ranks increase by one and are able to temporarily use an element the user possess as well as any jutsu the user knows of that element at the cost of two ranks lower. This effect lasts for a max of 6 posts on a person before needing another injection. If in a dire situation the person injected with these snakes can also force the snake out, and drink the chakra directly, vastly increasing their chakra and power, as well as inducing a body-mutating transformation. Those who take this risk will become an asura like entity of sorts. They will grow in size until they standing at a max of 60 feet. Those who drink the chakra will also have their skin turn grey and their eyes black(unless they have a doujutsu) and grow three addition faces covered in green markings, six arms, and a tail. This resluts in a highly genetically unstable body which, if struck with sufficient force, can result in the body exploding. Those who drink the snakes can only do so once a topic and will have their strength, locomotive speed, chakra capacity, and ninjutsu ranks are boosted by two ranks, note that this does not stack with the chakra boost from being injected and instead replaces it. The cost for this increase in power is that their health rank lowers two stages and if they are hit with a force that is at least one rank higher than their health their body will explode on a cellular level effectively killing them. These effects only last a max of eight posts. This jutsu also boosts strategic and offense value on its own, and does not need to be used as merely support like most medical jutsu. If the dark snakes are injected into an opponent or target, the user can alter the mixture of medically altered yang chakra to send a person's body and heart into shock causing them to go into a state of paralysis, and sometimes even death. If a person is paralyzed the area where the person is bit will become purple and their veins will bulge out slightly and it will fade when the person is freed from the jutsu. If the bite kills a person their will be no mark left and no way to tell cause of death, making this jutsu perfect for assassinations. The effects these snakes will have on an opponent will depend on the different between the opponent's health and the user's rank in medical enhancements. - effects:
If the person's health is higher than the snake's power than there is no paralysis but a decrease in locomotive and reaction speed by one rank for two posts
If the person's health is equal to the power of the snakes than the person is paralyzed for one post and will suffer a rank decrease in speed and reaction speed by one for two posts after the post of paralysis
If the person's health is one rank lower than the power of the snakes then they will be paralyzed for three posts and suffer a decrease in speed and reaction speed by two ranks for 3 posts after being affected.
If the person's health is two ranks lower than the power of the snakes then power of the snakes then they will be paralyzed for five posts and revive a decrease in speed and reaction speed by two ranks for the remainder of the topic
Any difference higher results in instant death.
Note: anytime after being bitten that a target's health increases to be stronger than the power of the snakes then they will be freed from paralysis at the end of the post Wordcount to learn: 5000 Bonus Requirements: know a medical technique for each rank E-A Backstory: Created by a demon worshiping clan of medically talented ninja
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Kirito the Forest Sage Academy
Posts : 1817 Join date : 2015-01-14 Age : 32
Character sheet Character Name: Kirito Senju Clan: Senju Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral
| Subject: Re: Strengthening prescription: Chakra Injection Sat Apr 11, 2015 1:34 pm | |
| first effect of a target being bitten says " there is paralysis but a decrease in locomotive and reaction speed" I think you meant "isnt paralysis"
all the effects are fine but please put "If the targets health raises to 1 rank above the snakes power after being bitten they will be released from the effects of this jutsu" | |
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Roland Ootsutsuki Owner
Posts : 1195 Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet Character Name: Roland Clan: Ootsutsuki Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| Subject: Re: Strengthening prescription: Chakra Injection Sat Apr 11, 2015 3:46 pm | |
| Chakra rank in general is too high of a boost, pick two stats of the chakra field if you wish.
This is for both times you state chakra rank increase, just a minor thing.
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Venus Academy
Posts : 116 Join date : 2015-03-22
| Subject: Re: Strengthening prescription: Chakra Injection Sat Apr 11, 2015 3:53 pm | |
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Roland Ootsutsuki Owner
Posts : 1195 Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet Character Name: Roland Clan: Ootsutsuki Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| Subject: Re: Strengthening prescription: Chakra Injection Sat Apr 11, 2015 3:57 pm | |
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