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Dusk of the Iron Maiden
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PostSubject: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 1:13 am

Name: Blood-Scythe
Appearance:
Unawakened:
Spoiler:

Blade: 200 cm

Awakened:
Spoiler:

Blade: 173 cm

Rank: SS
Special Abilities:

Weapon shift: In its sealed form, it takes the form of a sword that slowly devours the opponent's chakra upon contact (meaning upon contact it saps 1 S rank from the opponent). The weapon in its awakened form takes the form of a scythe with a crimson energy blade that seems to be made out of seithr (chakra, or dense red energy). The blade itself transforms at SS rank speed, both going back and forth without the expendage of chakra though the chakra drain costs the user 1 A rank per usage. The drain can be resisted by one who's health is a rank higher than the drain itself.

Black Beast: The blade can merge with the user though at a heavy cost. The blade if given dominion over the users body amplifies their powers, boosting their locomotive speed, thought speed and reaction speed by two ranks due to the power of the blade itself enhancing the users overall reactions. In this form the user's body is covered with a dense purple aura and their eyes turn a glowing red, if seen by a doujutsu their body is simply a glowing purple mass of energy. If the user has some sort of concealment method, the the only indication of activation is through the eyes. (the boosts last for four posts before going on a six post cool down)


Black Beast's Poison: In addition to these changes, the users hands are covered in a pair of cloak like claws that carry the same ability as the blade itself and also carry its sharpness and health. Unlike the blade, the claws give the user half of the chakra absorbed back into their pool. The activation of this ability is 1 S rank with a upkeep of 1 A rank.


(both Black Beast and Black beast's poison share the same cost and upkeep ((Black Beast's Poison only activates when the user wants to inject the poison itself, so it would be 1 A rank per usage)) and the CD for Black Beast is eight posts after the last post it was used.)

Price: LW
Character Specific: Event
Bonus Requirements: Fight Ragna the Bloodedge

Backstory: The blade of legend owned by Ragna the Bloodedge


Last edited by Dusk of the Iron Maiden on Wed May 06, 2015 3:19 pm; edited 6 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 8:18 am

Almost legit.
- Needs a chakra cost for transforming.
- Nerf the absorption to A-rank per contact.
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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Element: Fire, Wind, Earth

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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 12:34 pm

NOT almost legit.

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Weapon shift: In its sealed form, it takes the form of a sword that slowly devours the opponent's soul upon contact (meaning upon contact it saps 1 S rank from the opponent). The weapon in its awakened form takes the form of a scythe with a crimson energy blade that seems to be made out of seithr (chakra, or dense red energy). The blade itself transforms at SS rank speed, both going back and forth without the expendage of chakra though the chakra drain costs the user 1 A rank per usage.

Holy fuck does this need a resist lmfao. Also that sounds like chakra not the soul, on this site while spiritual chakra yin is a thing so too is the soul and this just crosses so many things in one that it renders it non-nonsensical sorry.
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 2:10 pm

Edited for you kind sir
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 2:43 pm

Please see my Updated Charons claw, I may have missed being informed but I just noticed we can't have X rank be a baseline in any form on this site and so while LWs can boost to X I can't allow them to start at X rank.
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Dusk of the Iron Maiden
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 2:50 pm

Alright edited back to SS
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 3:05 pm

Separate Black Beast into two abilities please.
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 3:07 pm

Done
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 3:13 pm

Need cool downs for all and also

Need a cost and upkeep for Black beast as well as a limit on boosteronis.
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 3:14 pm

Black beast has a cost and upkeep its in Black beast's poison and the cool downs are in there as well
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 3:19 pm

I can't see one in the Black Poison, id you put all the cool downs in a different area or?
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 3:19 pm

I moved them down to the bottom in brackets
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 4:24 pm

So is its cool down six or eight posts?
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 5:04 pm

Black Beast's cd is eight posts
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PostSubject: Re: LW: Blood Scythe   LW: Blood Scythe EmptyWed May 06, 2015 5:27 pm

Oooooh okay I getcha now,

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