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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


Posts : 129
Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptyTue Apr 21, 2015 6:14 pm

Name: Makai-Yaiba
Appearance:
Physical Form and Blade Form:
Spoiler:


Rank: S
Special Abilities:
Hell Bringers Form: Because the blade is not made by shinobi hands but instead forged in the pits of hell the user takes the form of the one who created the blade.  This transform takes 1D rank chakra capacity when first activated of which it would drain 1 C rank capacity for every post it is active for.

Hell Bringers Gate: This ability allows the blade slice the air in four lines down, four lines across. Once the lines have been created they become engulfed in flames and sent at a target at a speed of S. If caught the gates will surround the user in a gate of flames sealing the top of the gates as well. These flames can not be extinguished if caught in the hell bringers gate. Only an outside source can extinguish the flames or if the user deactivates Hell bringers form.  The flames have the strength of S and take a chakra capacity of A every use. These flames can not be consumed  This skill is only used for binding.  One can walk through the flames but one would have to have health stats equal to or higher than the user's current health stats to walk through without taking damage equal to the strength of the user's current stat.

Hell Bringers Strength: This ability allows the user to have the strength of the creator of the blade, the strength of the user is +1 stat of strength.  This ability is part of Hell Bringers Form

Passive:
Much like any Sword this blade can also be used to attack, the blade carries the flames of hell inside of it which are active when attacked.  The flames are at a strength of S as well as having the properties to hurt even the fire DS but the strength of the flames dim down to the strength of A when used against a Fire DS.

Price: 9000 {Purchased}
Character Specific: Enzeru Metsuki
Bonus Requirements:

Backstory:
The weapon is said to be made by a demon nick named "Hell Bringer" he used to be a fellow angel who was cast down into hell, for his revenge he decided to forge a blade that would take the properties of hells torturous flame as curse the user to take Hell Bringer's physical form.  This was to be revenge to cause chaos, this blade would eventually be left in the hands of the Metsuki Clan which have been tasked by the Last Raikage to protect with their life as the blade's demonic properties were not of this world and were dangerous to be put in anyone else's hands.


Last edited by Gunji Osaka on Sat Apr 25, 2015 3:00 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


Posts : 129
Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptyWed Apr 22, 2015 4:07 pm

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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


Posts : 129
Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

Character sheet
Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptyThu Apr 23, 2015 2:27 pm

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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


Posts : 129
Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptyThu Apr 23, 2015 11:33 pm

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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


Posts : 129
Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 2:16 pm

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Kirito the Forest Sage
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Kirito the Forest Sage


Posts : 1817
Join date : 2015-01-14
Age : 32

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Character Name: Kirito Senju
Clan: Senju
Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 2:56 pm

What does the transformation do other than make you waste chakra on it?


For hellbringer's gate, you may want to change "user" to "target" here: "Once the lines have been created they become engulfed in flames and sent at a user at a speed of S. If caught the gates will surround the user in a gate of flames sealing the top of the gates as well. " unless you plan on using this to only ever attack yourself. Also idk how I feel about it not being able to be broken from the inside.


It's passive skill in general just doesnt make sense to me
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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


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Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 2:57 pm

The transformation is purposely a curse meaning you can't use the sword for too long it drains your chakra, I made it to balance the other abilities
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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 3:00 pm

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Kirito the Forest Sage
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Clan: Senju
Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 3:09 pm

Mk. Approved unless I missed something
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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


Posts : 129
Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 3:20 pm

51961-9000=42961ryo left

Buying Makai Yaiba
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Yoshi Dichimaru
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Yoshi Dichimaru


Posts : 129
Join date : 2015-04-16
Age : 30

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Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru
Clan: Shiroyin
Element: Fire

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 7:18 pm

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Kirito the Forest Sage
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Kirito the Forest Sage


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Join date : 2015-01-14
Age : 32

Character sheet
Character Name: Kirito Senju
Clan: Senju
Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptySat Apr 25, 2015 7:20 pm

Approved
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Join date : 2015-04-25

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Character Name: Enzeru Metsuki
Clan: Metsuki/CLN
Element: Lightning

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PostSubject: Re: Makai-Yaiba   Makai-Yaiba EmptyMon May 18, 2015 2:44 pm

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