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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Makai-Yaiba Tue Apr 21, 2015 6:14 pm | |
| Name: Makai-Yaiba Appearance:Physical Form and Blade Form: - Spoiler:
Rank: S Special Abilities:Hell Bringers Form: Because the blade is not made by shinobi hands but instead forged in the pits of hell the user takes the form of the one who created the blade. This transform takes 1D rank chakra capacity when first activated of which it would drain 1 C rank capacity for every post it is active for. Hell Bringers Gate: This ability allows the blade slice the air in four lines down, four lines across. Once the lines have been created they become engulfed in flames and sent at a target at a speed of S. If caught the gates will surround the user in a gate of flames sealing the top of the gates as well. These flames can not be extinguished if caught in the hell bringers gate. Only an outside source can extinguish the flames or if the user deactivates Hell bringers form. The flames have the strength of S and take a chakra capacity of A every use. These flames can not be consumed This skill is only used for binding. One can walk through the flames but one would have to have health stats equal to or higher than the user's current health stats to walk through without taking damage equal to the strength of the user's current stat. Hell Bringers Strength: This ability allows the user to have the strength of the creator of the blade, the strength of the user is +1 stat of strength. This ability is part of Hell Bringers Form Passive: Much like any Sword this blade can also be used to attack, the blade carries the flames of hell inside of it which are active when attacked. The flames are at a strength of S as well as having the properties to hurt even the fire DS but the strength of the flames dim down to the strength of A when used against a Fire DS. Price: 9000 {Purchased} Character Specific: Enzeru Metsuki Bonus Requirements: Backstory: The weapon is said to be made by a demon nick named "Hell Bringer" he used to be a fellow angel who was cast down into hell, for his revenge he decided to forge a blade that would take the properties of hells torturous flame as curse the user to take Hell Bringer's physical form. This was to be revenge to cause chaos, this blade would eventually be left in the hands of the Metsuki Clan which have been tasked by the Last Raikage to protect with their life as the blade's demonic properties were not of this world and were dangerous to be put in anyone else's hands.
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Wed Apr 22, 2015 4:07 pm | |
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Thu Apr 23, 2015 2:27 pm | |
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Thu Apr 23, 2015 11:33 pm | |
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:16 pm | |
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Kirito the Forest Sage Academy
Posts : 1817 Join date : 2015-01-14 Age : 32
Character sheet Character Name: Kirito Senju Clan: Senju Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:56 pm | |
| What does the transformation do other than make you waste chakra on it?
For hellbringer's gate, you may want to change "user" to "target" here: "Once the lines have been created they become engulfed in flames and sent at a user at a speed of S. If caught the gates will surround the user in a gate of flames sealing the top of the gates as well. " unless you plan on using this to only ever attack yourself. Also idk how I feel about it not being able to be broken from the inside.
It's passive skill in general just doesnt make sense to me | |
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:57 pm | |
| The transformation is purposely a curse meaning you can't use the sword for too long it drains your chakra, I made it to balance the other abilities | |
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 3:00 pm | |
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Kirito the Forest Sage Academy
Posts : 1817 Join date : 2015-01-14 Age : 32
Character sheet Character Name: Kirito Senju Clan: Senju Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 3:09 pm | |
| Mk. Approved unless I missed something | |
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 3:20 pm | |
| 51961-9000=42961ryo left
Buying Makai Yaiba | |
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Yoshi Dichimaru Special Jounin
Posts : 129 Join date : 2015-04-16 Age : 30
Character sheet Character Name: Yoshi Dichimaru Clan: Shiroyin Element: Fire
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 7:18 pm | |
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Kirito the Forest Sage Academy
Posts : 1817 Join date : 2015-01-14 Age : 32
Character sheet Character Name: Kirito Senju Clan: Senju Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Sat Apr 25, 2015 7:20 pm | |
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Enzeru The New Workaholic GFX/Coder
Posts : 253 Join date : 2015-04-25
Character sheet Character Name: Enzeru Metsuki Clan: Metsuki/CLN Element: Lightning
| Subject: Re: Makai-Yaiba Mon May 18, 2015 2:44 pm | |
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