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Jun Special Jounin
Posts : 89 Join date : 2015-04-09
| Subject: Wilt and Blush [LW] Mon Apr 20, 2015 9:49 am | |
| Name: Wilt and Blush [LW] Appearance: Backstory: Health: S Sharpness: SS Special Abilities: Gun Sheath: the sheath of the sword focuses chakra and can be released in a powerful blast. the shot is small but carries the potency of the wielders chakra. This shot has a range of 20 meters, a speed of S and a power of S this ability costs S, cooldown of 3. should the sword be in the sheath was the time of the shot the sword will be fired out hilt first. the power of the sword hitting someone is B Iaido: The Blade is thin and lithe, able to attack and withdraw with little effort at all. Any sword skills used with this weapon gain a rank up in speed. Attack Absorption: If this blade comes into contact with a Ninjutsu it is able to analyze and store data about that jutsu within the sheath. The blade still suffers any damage it would normally, and it can only store one jutsu at a time. This function has a two turn cool down. Gun Sheath Attack: The user Sheaths their blade, and charges the blade with energy from the stored Jutsu. For a single attack the blade projects a three meter long beam of energy from the tip of the blade. Before unleashing it in an attack. This attack has a speed,power, and cost of SS. And is on a 5 turn cooldown. Additonally the Beam of energy gains some properties of the Jutsu that is stored within the sheath. (I.E if it absorbed a stored a Chidori, it's gain a stunning quality. If it stored a fireball it'd become a gout of flame. It cannot replicate Ninjutsu that require a medium, like earth, explosive clay, or water.) After the Jutsu is used, it's data is lost, and a new Jutsu has to be programmed. Price: Event Character Specific: Event Bonus Requirements:
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Roland Ootsutsuki Owner
Posts : 1195 Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet Character Name: Roland Clan: Ootsutsuki Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Mon Apr 20, 2015 11:51 am | |
| Please place LW in the title. - Quote :
- Gun Sheath: the sheath of the sword focuses chakra and can be released in a powerful blast. the shot is small but carries the potency of the wielders chakra. This shot has a range of 20 meters, a speed of S and a power of S this ability costs A should the sword be in the sheath was the time of the shot the sword will be fired out hilt first. the power of the sword hitting someone is B
What is the cost for the shot? It obviously uses quite a bit of chakra. - Quote :
- Iaido: The Blade is thin and lithe, able to attack and withdraw with little effort at all. Any sword skills used with this weapon gain a rank up in speed.
This is fine but in that case we will have to ask you to bump health down a rank to compensate for the other abilities you desire. - Quote :
- Gun Sheath Iaido attack: This is a very special attack in which the user charges their chakra gun in the sheath and then attacks while simultaneously firing the gun. This produces an attack so fast it is able to disintegrate large structures. This attack requires more chakra than the gun sheath is able to produce. However the power can be increased by absorbing other attacks. The power of attacks that are absorbed by partially pulling the blade out of the sheath are added to the power charged. jutsu or attacks that hit the blade like this are completely nullified. The attack is then done by drawing in the Iaido fashion and slashing while firing the gun to increase the speed of the slash. This creates a near instantaneous chakra blade along the path of the attack as if the blade were extended out 3 meters. The speed of the attack is SS and the power of the attack is Equal to the jutsu absorbed. The slash itself costs SS.
I don't think the speed of techniques disintergrates buildings, I believe that is power. Also this is about three abilities in one. Separate them out, LW get 5. I can already tell you that complete nullification with what you want is a no no. | |
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Kikato "L" Rinku Academy
Posts : 929 Join date : 2015-02-10 Age : 30 Location : Ukiyoe
Character sheet Character Name: Kikato Rinku Clan: Otsutsuki Element: Earth,Wind,Lightning,Sand,Glass
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Mon Apr 20, 2015 12:04 pm | |
| Just to make a side note, please do not scauld him to much as this was just a rendering of the blade Arc had made | |
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Jun Special Jounin
Posts : 89 Join date : 2015-04-09
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Mon Apr 20, 2015 5:35 pm | |
| Done Put the Cost after the speed and power Done Split them into two skills And changed, that. lemme know! | |
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Roland Ootsutsuki Owner
Posts : 1195 Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet Character Name: Roland Clan: Ootsutsuki Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Mon Apr 20, 2015 7:28 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Attack Absorption: If this blade comes into contact with a Ninjutsu it is able to analyze and store data about that jutsu within the sheath. The blade still suffers any damage it would normally, and it can only store one jutsu at a time.
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- Gun Sheath: the sheath of the sword focuses chakra and can be released in a powerful blast. the shot is small but carries the potency of the wielders chakra. This shot has a range of 20 meters, a speed of S and a power of S this ability costs S should the sword be in the sheath was the time of the shot the sword will be fired out hilt first. the power of the sword hitting someone is B
These need cool downs but are otherwise fine. Good job. | |
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Jun Special Jounin
Posts : 89 Join date : 2015-04-09
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:50 pm | |
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Jun Special Jounin
Posts : 89 Join date : 2015-04-09
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:50 pm | |
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Keitaro Academy
Posts : 206 Join date : 2015-04-07
Character sheet Character Name: Clan: Element:
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:19 pm | |
| Gun Sheath: No, that is by all means, an actual gun. I'm sorry that's not gonna work, you can change it to launching out the blade sheath with force but you're not gonna have a legit gun.
Iaido: I have no issue with this ability.
Attack absorption: Fine since SS, however you have to pick between it or Gun Sheath Attack.
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Jun Special Jounin
Posts : 89 Join date : 2015-04-09
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:53 pm | |
| I'd Actually like the person who's been reviewing this to finish it up, thanks. | |
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Roland Ootsutsuki Owner
Posts : 1195 Join date : 2015-03-07
Character sheet Character Name: Roland Clan: Ootsutsuki Element: Fire, Wind, Earth
| Subject: Re: Wilt and Blush [LW] Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:54 pm | |
| Okay, - Quote :
- Gun Sheath: No, that is by all means, an actual gun. I'm sorry that's not gonna work, you can change it to launching out the blade sheath with force but you're not gonna have a legit gun.
Iaido: I have no issue with this ability.
Attack absorption: Fine since SS, however you have to pick between it or Gun Sheath Attack. | |
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