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Roland Ootsutsuki
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Roland Ootsutsuki


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Character Name: Roland
Clan: Ootsutsuki
Element: Fire, Wind, Earth

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PostSubject: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyTue Mar 17, 2015 12:11 pm

Name: Charon's Claw
Appearance:
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The sword had a slender, razor-edged, gleaming red blade, its length inscribed with designs of cloaked figures and tall scythes, accentuated by a black blood trough running along its center. Entreri opened his hand enough for the wizard to see the skull-bobbed pommel, with a hilt that appeared like whitened vertebrae. Running from it toward the crosspiece, the hilt was carved to resemble a backbone and rib-cage, and the crosspiece itself resembled a pelvic skeleton, with legs spread out wide and bent back toward the head, so that the wielder's hand fit neatly within the 'bony' boundaries. All of the pommel, hilt and crosspiece was white, like bleached bones—perfectly white, except for the eye sockets of the skull pommel, which seemed like black pits at one moment and flared with red fires the next. It is two and a half feet long and half a foot at the widest part of it's leaf blade. It comes with the gauntlet that wields the weapon.

Health: S
Sharpness: SS

Special Abilities:
Ash Wall - The user may wish to leave an opaque ashen wall when they swing their sword, it obstructs the view. The speed for this technique is the same for the blade being swung, as it could not be any other way trailing from the sword as it does so. The ashen wall stays longer or shorter depending on how much chakra is used. E rank- 1 Post, D rank- 3 Posts, C rank- 5 Posts. There is no cooldown, and the user may make multiple ash walls in a single post if they have the chakra.
Festering Bite - Any wound received by this blade is death unless they use a S rank or above poison curing technique within the same topic. If any is not used, the wound will fester and cause them to die of a rapid infection(occurring within two posts of their next topic). This has no cooldown, no upkeep, it is simply the swords doing. It may be resisted if the user's health is higher than or equal to the blade's sharpness.
Faerun's Bite - This will boost the user's willpower by two ranks while also raising the sharpness of the blade by two ranks and it's health by one. This cost an A rank to activate and costs a B rank as an upkeep cost for the next ten posts before needing a cool down of ten posts.

Price: Defeat Artemis
Character Specific:
Bonus Requirements: The ability to control spiritual energy, thus keeping the gauntlet in use and being able to wield the weapon.


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Arcanis Lord of Time
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyTue Mar 17, 2015 4:27 pm

you have seen some of the exceptions to the rule. the weapon has to be a LW and fought for in the LW event and your bonus requirement can only be winning it in the fight. the health and sarpness of this weapon with 5 abilities will be capped at 150. the other weapons were increased due to having a reduced number of abilities

as for your abilities. they all need defining charactoristics speed, power, cooldown, duration, cp cost the works where applicable. Edit it up and I will re look
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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Element: Fire, Wind, Earth

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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed Mar 18, 2015 10:09 am

Updated, couldn't find the stuffs in the weapon rules so I hope I did it right. Tried to mold it as close to the actual blade as can be.
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed Mar 18, 2015 2:08 pm

ok well you didn't read half of my post. also if this is a LW you can't limit it to something only you can do. also silent maliciousness is not going to be allowed nor is the gauntlets chakra catching without proper limits
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed Mar 18, 2015 2:44 pm

It's not, not in the least. Anyone with a high enough will can wield it, I was clear to put that in even before you brought it up which may make it seem like I ignored you, I did not. The sentient thing is a part of the blade, but I suppose I could switch it out and go with the site favored stat boosts. Yes, another thing I put in there to match the story. The only time it fails a wielder of the blade is when they were too slow to react, its shown to catch a great many things regardless of the user's magical aptitude and I thought the translation would work over rather well, limiting the catching to having the user have a speed the same as the jutsu they catch is a limit but if that is not proper then I suppose I could just make it an area effect and add in a chakra cost or something? I am open to suggestions.
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed Mar 25, 2015 9:43 pm

Updated to match the new LW rules
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Mar 27, 2015 8:48 pm

Bump
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Mar 27, 2015 11:20 pm

If I understand the LW rules correctly this is not up to standard. however ask Kikato/Tenno as he made the strange new LW rules.
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Roland Ootsutsuki
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Mar 27, 2015 11:39 pm

Considering he helped make both this and the gauntlet I don't think he wants to step in to mod them.
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Mar 27, 2015 11:41 pm

Both this and the Gauntlet follow LW rules, I understand the Ruling on the One legendary Ticket, one weapon part, but everything else is up to par
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptySat Mar 28, 2015 11:05 pm

Bump
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed Apr 08, 2015 1:27 pm

Updated.
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed Apr 08, 2015 4:36 pm

The Resist stat needs to be at least S-rank Health and higher please
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed Apr 08, 2015 5:59 pm

Added that in.
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Apr 10, 2015 11:07 am

Nvm already had a good resist to it, sick of this taking so long.
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Apr 10, 2015 12:24 pm

Change resist to equal to or higher than and I'll approve
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Apr 10, 2015 12:26 pm

Updated
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyFri Apr 10, 2015 12:32 pm

Approved, on light watch
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PostSubject: Re: Charon's Claw   Charon's Claw EmptyWed May 06, 2015 2:39 pm

Updated, claiming for halfway through the Non-PvP prize. Should fit with the new LW standards, and I can link this as an example in the rules if it is satisfactory.
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